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• Pretty Eyes

  (#) comatosejoyx 2011-06-01

  Awww. I still don't forgive Frank but it was a lovely end to a great story.

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) FlyingSmoke 2011-06-01

  Thank you for the extra chapter. It finished off the fiction perfectly. Lucie was all Frank, wasn't she? She probably helped out a lot.
  The ending... sigh Then ending made me cry. Not the funeral, or the dumbass LynZ, but Frank's mini gallery. I won't cry at most anything, but you made me cry. Kudos.

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-06-01

  CONTINUE 'FALLING'!!! brilliant story, that ending brought a tear to my eye :')

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) rainbow_apocalypse 2011-06-01

  you are a awesome wright this story was so beautiful and moving at the end and the song gone with its so well no am not a big Avril Lavigne but the song gose well i cry a bit at the end you can tell frankie love Gee so much but he did what he thought was best at the time
  xoxo

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) Nicnivin 2011-06-01

  This was beautiful....I cried..again! One of my favorites and I agree, you should continue 'Falling'
  xxxxxxxxx
  -Nicnivin

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  (#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2011-06-01

  oh... no offense, but that ending kinda sucked. It was very abbrupt and how the fuck did gee die?

  Author's response

  Aw, sorry you didn't like it. :/ Yeah I know the ending was a bit abrupt, which is part of why I put in the extra chapter to cushion the blow.
  
  But to answer your question: During the part where Bandit looks over at Lindsey while talking to Frank, she mentions he died of end stage lung cancer. Probably from his smoking habit.

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) CarronKilljoy 2011-06-01

  Thank you. Thank you so much for one of the most beautiful, inspiring and moving things I have ever read. This story was so incredible and was even better with the sad ending (I cried a lot ) I really wanted a happy ending for them but it would have been so obvious so it's better this way. Thanks again, I love your writing

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) SoundlyAwakeTonight 2011-06-01

  I never cried harder T.T This was a great story, thank you for writing it, it was moving. I loved it! T.T
  Cries harder

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  (#) jadesohma 2011-06-01

  NO NO NO NO!!!!!! HE CAN'T DIE! GERARD WAY WILL LIVE FOREVER! I swear that's just preparing me for his real death. Anyway. I can't say that I loved it... BUT IT WAS REALLY GOOD:D Crying, but amazing awesome! :D Your faithful servent, ~JS~

• Pretty Eyes

  (#) ONotz 2011-06-01

  Very original and moving. I love it. I trully do.

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