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• The Reading

  (#) Darkmark66 2011-06-01

  Very good I never liked Albus him bashed is always good and after that line about Harry coming out from his cuboard I just wanted Harry to punch or kill him. I thought Albus did more harm to Harry than the Dark Lord who wanted Harry dead Albus wanted him to suffer then die when the time was right.
  
  I hope the Weasley's get bashed a bit too as they are blind followers of Albus and I hate Ron.
  
  A great twist for the Head of the Black family.
  
  Firenze was a really nice idea.
  
  I hope the Dursley's suffer.
  
  I look forward to what will happen next.

• The Reading

  (#) dennisud 2011-06-01

  Good start, clearly you want Hermione close to Harry and the hints are there as to how close. Kitty's a good ACC but fill out her background more as you go.
  I can already see Dumbles try to get things his way but "Madam" Bones, Head of the DMLE should be able to handle him! Oh and remember Luna Lovegood's a good catalytic character! Use here here to help Harry!
  
  dennisud

• The Reading

  (#) jabarber69 2011-06-01

  okay you got my interest, who is this new head of black....????
  
  also the bit about firenze was way cool, go Padfoot!!!!

• The Reading

  (#) Cateagle 2011-06-01

  Som very nice bits here and I hope to see a sequel where the new head of House Black gets named and he and Harry compare notes and start cooperating; especially if they also involve House Longbottom and House Bones in their efforts.

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