(#) annabel-lee 2011-06-04I love the way this is written. Lots of emotion and it's realistic. Realistic in the sense it doesn't tell the reader exactly what's going on-which adds more mystery-and the emotions and dialogue is so real and doesn't seem corny. You did absoluttely fantastic and I czn't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!
(#) emocutter91 2011-06-04Ohmahfuckinggod, please continue this; you have to make Gerard get better so we can read it! Or, ya know, kill him off, like you tend to do...
But still, this (and everything else you write that I've read) made me cry. I'm glad you made those few changes though, before it was positively unbearable to think Mikey was behind the whole thing... And now it seems like a joke Mikey made with no intentions of anyone going through with it may have been overheard by Bert fucking Mckracken.
*sigh* oh wellz, even if you leave it here, I will think you killed Gerard, so unless you write another part........ Ya' know? :D
Beautiful, as usual. You never disappoint:)
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