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Harry Potter and the Next Overlord
(#) twistyguru 2011-06-06
lol
Don't expect me to be hating if the odd Ministry official gets popped along the way.
Oops.
There...that about covers it.
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(#) OdinMage 2011-06-06
I'm liking this story, and really want to see where you'll take it, but I'm kind of getting sick of Harry being a whiny bitch. I know he is in canon, but... this isn't canon. So I hope that changes soon.Harry Potter and the Next Overlord
(#) Ryudo3 2011-06-08
It haves been a while since i have play the game so I'm a little rusty but enjoy it all in the same. Can't wait to see the next chapter.Harry Potter and the Next Overlord
(#) DragonWing 2011-06-09
My guess is that at the wedding, Ron will die. Or some other Weasley. I don't see Harry using the minions again because he's so traumatized by the realities of war, that only a personal loss would motivate him to seek out Gnarl again, and thereby making Harry more and more corrupted.
Loved Luna calling to her dad that she was on her way to be his mistress. lol.Author's response
You're on the right path, but not quite there yet. It's still another chapter or two til then, though, as I need to reread the chapters leading up to that. Check out my other works in the meantime and I'll update ASAP.Harry Potter and the Next Overlord
(#) David3560 2011-06-21
I say harry need more then one mistress Hermione and Luna would be good. Yes all for that. Lets see we add Sussan, Both Fleur and Gabrielle D. MMM who else who else you do know running a neatherworld is hard work so he going to need help right. MMMM who else for Mistresses.
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