- I just love your Yuffie voice, she makes everything cracky fun and I just have to grin while reading. And the idea of Vincent consciously slowing his vitals in the coffin is genius and it makes a lot of sense, I don't think I've ever seen it done before. So many awesome little touches in this story.
- I should have known that their plan to eliminate the entry point of the Heartless would not work, but I didn't know how spectacularly it was going to erupt on them. Above all I love that final portion of this chapter. It's so chilling. I love the way you describe the Heartless as these swarms of terrifying alien things. You make them seem real and frightening as hell.
I love the way you describe Darkside as a huge man of ungainly and strange proportions. Your description just sent shivers down my spine.
I really also adore the moment when Tifa and Yuffie both break down. That must have been a long time coming for them.
I also truly love when Tifa and Barret dance.
I adore Yuffie and Vincent playing chess and tic tac toe and hangman over the phone.
You write all of the characters so well.
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