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The Vegas Strip
(#) PartyPoison 2011-06-23
Wait! Either I completely missed something or there is something missing from the end.
In the beginning it says something about Ryan needing some sort of red pills to survive. But in the later chapters there were only a couple mentions and then they dispeared... I think.
You may have explained it in one of the chapters and I am having serious memory blank but if not I think you should explain what happened with the pills.
Other than that I really liked this story. It was a happy one :) I found it very amusing picturing the four of them grabbing the vodka bottle from each other.The Vegas Strip
(#) marissasorrentino 2011-06-23
This was an amazing story. I think you should make a sequel. I know I would read it. Great job. :)The Vegas Strip
(#) patdfan 2011-06-23
yesh continue with a sequal its my fave of your storys!!! plezz continue and like partypoision said with the pills its was epicily epic (yea thts right i said tht) this one made me smile very bi and kinda make me have happy tears :)The Vegas Strip
(#) LePanicFan 2011-06-24
Damn you're good. And yeah, what did happen to the red pills? You're gonna have to write another to explain now! That is your punishment for being so brilliant ;)The Vegas Strip
(#) MCRARMYxxxxxDusky 2011-06-26
i would write a sequel because loads of people would read it because this was sooooo amazing! xx
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