Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Everybody scream
Reviews
Everybody scream
(#) midnightblackparade 2011-06-25
Ooooohhh good so far. Who will she choose? Carry on and update fast :) xoxo (i am now a loyal fan)
XoXoX ~~~Meghan~~~Author's response
I will update asap I think I'll be finished by this morning so stay tuned. :)Everybody scream
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-06-28
2 words: Mary Sue.
The writing wasn't bad but there are a lot of errors grammatically speaking. Letters need to capitalised, spelled correctly, etc. I'll keep reading but the main character seems slightly clichéd at the moment. I like your description of the characters, though.Author's response
Thank you very much I'll take that in mind next time.
Sign up to review this story.