(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-06-28UMMMMMM!!! :o YOU SAID ERECTION! I'M TELLING MUM, 12 YEAR OLDS CANNOT USE THAT KIND OF LANGUAGE!!!!!
Ahh, the Maury Show. Just one of the few things that makes life worth living. Despite your disgusting, evil, dirty thoughts this was a great chapter and I'm so pleased you updated! But now Gerard is leaving and poor Frank and...sniff. So sad. :'(
(#) Kid_Vicous 2011-06-28You're 12?!! The writing in this is fantastic for anybody, let alone a 12 year old! I'm beyond impressed. The characters are as original as the plotline, the description is incredibly clean and there were only a few tiny mistakes I'm pretty sure you'll pick up on if you read it again but to be honest I'm not bothered about them. Brilliant work but I just have one question I need you to answer: did she just fuck a dead guy?
- This one of the few fictions I've read on here that's very well written. Some of them aren't the greatest but this one..is just....Wow, awesome and your idea is totally different! Most of the high school fictions are...Girl moves to NJ goes to same school, meets whoever then meets the rest, falls for one of them...and so on! I hope you can update this soon! I love it! Lol
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