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• Where the animals should go...

  (#) fueledbyPanic 2011-06-30

  awww that was so sweet :,)
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• Where the animals should go...

  (#) fueledbyPanic 2011-06-30

  oh yeah this is just a suggestion but try to separate the story into a bit shorter paragraphs so it doesn't look so condensed. It also makes it easier to read. :)
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  Author's response

  ok, I will :D
  (and again, thx for reviewing)

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) comatosejoyx 2011-06-30

  That was a lovely chapter. I agree with breaking up the paragraphs though. Hope the wait for the next one isn't too long.

  Author's response

  i'll try to get it up soon! :)

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) ILoveGerardMCR 2011-07-01

  I keep checking your story every day to make sure you updated :D I love this and I hope the wait for the 3rd part isn't going to be too long :) xxx

  Author's response

  wow thanks! I'll try to get is up soon

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