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Is It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?
(#) Bitch-Bot 2011-07-05
i think they cut off the end of thisAuthor's response
Yeah they did, thanks for letting me know. I've re-uploaded the chapter now, but I think it may take a bit for it to appear. Thanks :) xoxoIs It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?
(#) sushiipodrocks 2011-07-05
Yeah they did, thanks for letting me know. I've re-uploaded the chapter now, but I think it may take a bit for it to appear. Thanks :) xoxoIs It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?
(#) andreajp 2011-07-05
Shit! I don't think I can put a coherent thought together to for a proper review! For the love of god I hope you can update this soon!Author's response
Aha :') I know I like only just replied to your other review but I'm gonna reply to this too because you had the time to review :) I've typed up about half of the chapter now so it SHOULD hopefully be up tomorrow. Plus this one should be longer too - I've noticed they've been getting shorter "/ thanks for reviewing! XoxoIs It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?
(#) PandaFrankie 2011-07-06
I love this story! It has so much suspense, and I damn near cried when Linda talked to Gerard and Frankie for the last time- it was so real. I love tje way you incorporate lyrics and quotes and ideas in- the way The Black Parade came for Linda in Frank's dream, the forming of the band, everything. I loved iy. Olot of it had me laughing, like Alicia's dare XD Genius! Only bad thing is, your grammar kinda throws me off the story. It's a bit distracting. Never mind, though, nobody's perfect :3
I finished this chapter and I thought it was the end of the story and I was like FFFUUU NOOOOOO and then I checked the date and I was like, "Oh, it's recent, YAY MORE FICS FOR ME :D"
Keep writing, you have extreme potential! XoAuthor's response
Thank you! Really glad you're enjoying it :D I'll keep in mind what you said about the grammar and try to improve :) xoxo
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