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• Revenge is so Sweet Chapter 1

  (#) GrantLarceny 2011-07-12

  First of all you need to get someone who reads/writes/speaks English to translate this fic. Trust me when I say everything is wrong.
  
  I only got through a few paragraphs(which were plagued with every kind of grammatical/punctuation error)before I gave up.
  
  You have to put chapter titles on every chapter. No one is going to click on those numbers. When I first opened this fic I thought all the chapters were empty.
  
  The spelling is pretty good and thanks for the effort.

• Revenge is so Sweet Chapter 1

  (#) big_johnson 2011-07-12

  This clearly needs to be edited by a native english speaker. It has none of the flow you get from an English 1st writer.

• Revenge is so Sweet Chapter 1

  (#) Darkmark66 2011-07-13

  Thanks for putting this into english a good start.

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