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Pregnant with my bestfriends brothers baby, disaster
(#) Ravenna_Dark_Elf 2020-04-16
What does this have to do with Gilmore Girls? I am a MAJOR fan and was disappointed by this. The story itself is okay, but perhaps could use and original flair. You simply MUST improve your punctuation skills. Where are the quotation marks? And how does the mum go from soothing to kicking her out of the house all in one go? Honestly...
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