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CH15 - General, Comte And Comtesse
3 reviewsHarry meets Fleur's parents and they tell him their plan
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The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) AnnF 2006-12-27
lots of little typos flu instead of floo dam instead of damn...The Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) erin_riley 2007-05-16
I like the story and all, but you make a lot of misspellings. such as this small paragraph from ch. 15.
"They are right Harry." said Viktor "This war is the reason that I have been training so hard, because I new that I would have to pick a side and after hearing about Gabrielle I new that side was not Dumbledore's."
When Victor says he new something, it should be spelled "knew". That would be the proper form of the word, and I believe you used no instead of "know" as well. You might be correct later on in the story, I'm only up to ch. 15, but I just thought you'd appreciate knowing. Great story though, keep it up.
ErinThe Slayer, The Avatar And The Guardian Of Light
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-01-13
Very good chapter.
gunny
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