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He kicked her in the ribs as she was trying to get up, making her cry in pain. She felt her whole body retract but knew she had to stand up.
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First one to Fall(Gets another go round)
(#) CaroBECKETT 2011-08-12
Go team fob, go team! This is so exciting. Poor Pete.First one to Fall(Gets another go round)
(#) handmearazorblade 2011-08-21
This is really good! :) well done.
First one to Fall(Gets another go round)
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-08-22
This is absolutely amazing! I'm excited to read more, can't wait until you post again =)
Your writing is really excellent and the story is full of suspense. I'm really curious as to what happens in the next chapter.
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