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heartbroken one too many times
(#) black-midget 2011-08-19
Your story was interesting, i liked it. I would like to see those two line thingys (") when some one is speaking in the story. And don't be afraid to put Periods either. I like the pairing you chose, its cute ;) try typing your story out before hand and going over it to edit maybe twice (i do that alot) because it really helps :) keep writing!Author's response
thanks . ill be sure to do that
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