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I'm On My Way, Just Set Me Free...
(#) whiskeye 2011-09-21
i enjoyed that, even though i hate when axl'S the vilain:p but the story is interesting!Author's response
I'm glad you liked it! :D haha Axl wasn't actually supposed to be the bad guy at first. The Teller was just supposed to be some random douche but my sister convinced me that Axl would be perfect for the part and I think she might be right xD as much as I love Axl he is a doucheI'm On My Way, Just Set Me Free...
(#) bibelo 2011-09-22
aww poor nikky and mick!:p i like your ideaAuthor's response
I'm glad someone likes the idea! Everyone else thinks it's weird xP oh and I haven't decided everyone's fate yet so Nikki and Mick might turn out okay but I can't make any promises :)I'm On My Way, Just Set Me Free...
(#) whiskeye 2011-09-22
haha i don't think he's trying to hurt people though, he's just a little paranoid trying not to get hurt but hey, he can't be perfect, physically he pretty much got it all lol personally i think vince is much more of a douche,the way you wrote him was freakin funny :p i'm really eager to read the sequel. i love the way you wrote nikki too.. :)Author's response
The way is see it is Axl=douche and Vince=bitch/twat xD haha but I still love em both. I'm glad you like the way I wrote Nikki :) that was one of my main concerns because I made him kinda vulnerable which he never is xP I just thought I'd show a different side of him.
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