Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > October
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October
(#) midnightblackparade 2011-10-02
This is AMAZING for a first story keep it up cause i'll be reading :)
Xo Megan XoAuthor's response
Awhh, thanks! Means alot! :) I'll try & update really soon, hopefuly tonight :P & I'll check out your stories too! :) xx
hopefully* :POctober
(#) darkviolet 2011-12-17
I really like your writing style. You paint a very vivid picture, it kinda feels like were in a movie and I can hear a female voice reading the words while we look down on the scene.
I like the detailed description of the characters and the surrounding.
It was a great start, made me want read more!Author's response
Thank you very much! :) I do try to write it like a movie, so I'm happy that that's how it comes across :)
Thank you for reviewing! xx
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