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A Broken Heart
12 reviewsThanks to the helpful people who reviewed my fanfic, I've added some changes. Yet, this story still needs work... can you guys help me out, and tell me what I can add/change/take away, please? Th...
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A Broken Heart
(#) caity_party_princess 2006-06-10
I'm going to have to say the same could you maybe explain how Atlanta was taken?A Broken Heart
(#) Arisey 2006-06-11
It was okay, but you should have made it atleast a bit longer. Also, you could've explained how Atlanta had been captured.Author's response
Ok... I've added to the story, and I tried to sort of say how Atlanta was captured, but I also wanted the reader to decide what they think... Is that ok?
Thanks!A Broken Heart
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-06-11
Ohh, are you going to continiue this? I hope so, its REALLY good so far. Dont be so hard on yor self.Author's response
Sheepish grin Thanks... =) Yes, I think I'll continue this, but I'm not quite sure how to add to it... Anyways, it's exam week for me, so I'll have to finish after exams...A Broken Heart
(#) artemia-the-huntress 2006-06-18
you HAVE to continue! it's great so far, plz update!!!A Broken Heart
(#) divachick34 2007-01-15
heyy i love it please continue, poor archie he is such a caring guyAuthor's response
Oh wow. Oh WOW. I forgot all about this story since the summer! And look at all my comments! Well, I'm touched. All of you who commented. I'll have to continue now, won't I? ;) Thank you! All of you! ^^
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