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The Boy Who Won
3 reviewsHarry's thoughts and actions after the death of You-Know-Who. Mentions of death..my first ever fic, so reviews both good and bad are welcome, as well as tips.
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The Boy Who Won
(#) dhampirkinfolk 2011-10-16
It was...eh. Your writing is pretty good, but you should go back and try to fix the mistakes that the spellchecker missed. Agreed instead of agree, invisibility coat instead of cloak. Things like that. Next time, try for something with a little more substance to it. We want to read a steak sandwich, not lettuce on Melba toast.Author's response
Thanks for your review. Like i said it was a first try and i really appreciate your advice. I went back and fixed the spelling mistake - thanks for pointing them out to me..Thanks a lot..The Boy Who Won
(#) daemonx 2011-10-17
It was decent enough from a technical stand-point. Far too short and something that's been done to death, though. I'd rate it Cliche and move on.The Boy Who Won
(#) Dima1995 2019-01-29
What's the difference from the original? just a short version of the epilogue 7 books
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