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Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) xvampire-chick97x 2011-10-25
i dont tink tis store is moven fast enugh i tink u shud sped it up abit nd if u r lokin for knew ideas u cud meak gia prgant know tat she nd luckas r datin. it wud be intrsten for me.
nd i do lyk tis store i just tink it cud be bettar u no? lyk i sad befor, it is abit boren u no?Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) Heymimusic 2011-10-25
^(That took me about five minutes to decode that O.o) and I'd have to disagree with this person. I like the story the way it's paced now, that way you (the author) can keep on writing it with a lot of detail :)
And wow, how Gia has changed ! Before, she hated video games and the like, now she's playing those games, listening to music, etc. It's like watching someone bloom xD (that sounds so awkward!) I love love love x infinity this story !Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-10-25
Ignore the itteriate mong. This story is perfect just the way it is.
AND OMFG YOU PLAY ASSASSINS CREED TOO. IS IT NOT THE BEST FUCKING GAME EVER?!
Great chapter, great story. :)Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) kirrahdiviney 2011-10-25
i love the little family moment at the end :'D
- kirrah xx
p.s. i don't know why xvampire-chick97x is dissing your story when she can't even spell :SFly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) japulapu 2011-10-26
My official favourite reviwer is xvampire-chick97x. Who else has the guts to review a story with perfect grammar and english when they can't even spell the word 'story' right? Who else would have that brilliant idea to pair up Gia and Frank? I'm telling she's a prodigy. Talents like hers should not go unnoticed. And I also declare the funniest person I know, other than our friend who can't spell ofcourse. Gerard is my favourite character, simply becasue he's insane. I loved this chapter.Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) ReddyDevil 2011-10-26
Hey,
I've only just started reading this story, and am up to chapter 40, but i just wanted to say a couple of things...
1. when i first saw the amount of chapters, i was like, wow...this might be going nowhere for a long time, but i dont think that it is. I haven't been bored reading this yet, but maybe coz i kinda like long fanfics and stories.
2. Ha, do you like McFly??? Im only asking coz the name of the story is a lyric from Star Girl, and you've used a line from One For The Radio, and also there is (though he doesn't seem to be anything like him) a Danny. XD I'm having fun just reading and going: "Oh!! McFly reference! AH! There's another one!" XD
3. I've noticed a couple of little typos and stuff. That's okay, Im not too fussed about that, coz i know there is still a couple in my stories when i upload my chapters, no matter how hard i try to find and get rid of them. Just, if it really worried you and you wanted to get rid of them, I could edit chapters for typos if you wanted. I wouldn't change anything, just typos. And Im reliable, so I'd do it fast. It's just that Im really good at English and often edit stories for my friends and stuff. But you don't have to accept my offer. Just putting it out there so you know.
Anyway, keep up the good work so far! (i'll probs review again sometime when i eventually catch up)
~Mezza
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