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I've seen it all!
(#) Contemplation 2011-11-03
Well. It was okay. I've read better but this is close to them. Use said "taught" which I think you meant "thought". So I would fix that. But it was pretty good.Author's response
Sorry about that! It's my first fanfic so I also thought it wouldn't be that good.And it isn't over yet! I have more chapters to write!I've seen it all!
(#) venomous__revenge 2011-11-03
awe its cute, not bad for your first just maybe slow down a little and include a bit more detail and be more thorough in setting. im not a super experiance writter or anything so my opinion shouldnt matter :p but anyway you have me curious soo keep going
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