(#) monstrice901 2011-11-16hahahaha - rape me! of course! I actually burst out laughing when I read that... could have ended badly! I loved this - it creased me up and was really original.
You should deffo write some more if it is up to this standard (in terms of language and school type stuff, it was pretty good too). It was quite cute too, but I did think the end was a bit fast? Not tryna be a bitch or anything - cos this was awesome - but how Frank just came on to Gerard like that? It was kinda out of the blue. That's just my opinion though! XD
I loved this and will be looking out for more of your stuff!
Author's responseThank you very much, I'm glad that you found the whole Rape Me part funny - I wasn't too sure about that part. Sorry if the end was rushed and thanks for telling me what was wrong with it - I love constructive critiscism! Thanks for reviewing! :)
- oh my lord. oh my lord. i'm posting the link on my friend's wall- if she doesn't read this i'm raiding her house. it is SERIOUSLY the BEST Frerard one-shot i have EVER read. oh maa gaaddd. i'm serious i was sitting there, my nose practically shoved up against my screen like.. hyperventilating over this one-shot. i'm serious, WRITE MORE FRERARD!:D
Author's responseAw, thank you very, very much!! I'm very pleased that you liked it!
Thanks and I'll see what I can do! :D
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