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Chapter Twelve
35 reviewsThe wonder that is Frank Iero's saliva, weird nose fetishes, and the lettuce munching of reincarnated snails...
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) X-ToxicRainbow-X 2011-11-23
Ya know what? I'm pretty sure if it were legal I'd marry this story and have babies with it.
Ok, so maybe not babies,but I would marry it. That is how much I love it.(:"Be My Detonator."
(#) xXkillj0yXx 2011-11-24
I love you for updating! lol, fucking awesome as always :)"Be My Detonator."
(#) Niamh04 2011-11-24
I love you, I love this chapter I love this story!
How anybody could even think for a fraction of a second that your writing is anything other than pure epicness I cannot understand."Be My Detonator."
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-11-24
LIKE. DEFINITELY LIKE.
Frank is a naughty boy, methinks. ;) Update soon!
SF"Be My Detonator."
(#) MCR_punk 2011-11-24
**“The dude has some kinda weird nose fetish. Stay away from him, Gee.”
“He totally wants your dick.”**
Ray literally makes me laugh so fucking loud. Your writing is not going downhill, it's still fluffin' fanfuckingtastic! Don't ever think that! Your an amazing writer and this story is just epic! I can't believe it's ending..."Be My Detonator."
(#) methanemandie 2011-11-25
i squeaked like the crazy frerard-loving fan girl i am through all of this XD it is amazing as im sure u realised and i hope frank is licking more than gees nose soon ;D"Be My Detonator."
(#) MCRfan4life 2011-11-26
This story is definitely not going downhill! I absolutely love this story. I excitedly check on here everyday to see if you've updated it. It's probably the best I've ever read. It makes me laugh, in a good way, every single time. It's amazing.
Author's response
awww, thank you so much, seriously- that means a lot :D glad it makes you laugh and thank you so much for taking the time to review :D
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) MySuicideInSilence 2011-11-27
I love this story!! It's so fucking helarious! I'm always having a blast when I read this. You have made Gerard a clumsy, totally in love teenager,who is losing his mind xD
and I like that.Though I sometimes feel so much sympathy towards him. My favourite part too was 'He wants your dick' And your writing is NOT going down hill,it just gets better :) update soon.
Author's response
Thank yooou! So glad you're enjoying it...yeah, I feel a lot of sympathy for Gerard in this too, as I know how he feels :L thank you so much for taking the time to review...more sooon :D
CosmicZombie xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) CyanideCupcake 2011-11-28
asdfghjkl It's not going downhill, it's amazing ^^ I love it! UPDATE UPDATE!xo
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