(#) PartyPoison 2011-12-22Woot! I have a feeling this will be another superb story.
Ryan seems so small and fragile in this story. It’s a weird contrast to the ways you’ve portrayed him in your other stories but I like it. Patrick doesn’t even realize that Pete still cares for him I am guessing. Everyone just seems so sad and alone in this story. Even without the plane crash they were already broken.
I really would like it if you would write another chapter soon. This story is wonderful!
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