- Chapter 18 was a very nice touch. A more than slightly unstable Harry.
On another note, I can understand a fourteen year old not knowing the definition of a contract, but I have problems with someone of Dumblebutts stature not knowing it.
What the goblet does is not a contract by any definition of the word. Its more like a geas. A type of curse. But not in any shape form or fashion a contract, which is, by definition, an agreement.
Sorry, just venting.
- So far, I'm loving the tone. Anyone raised in "our" world versus some magical wonderland would definitely have a better undestanding of what it means to deliver pain. I always thought the whole TW tourney thing was a bit off. How would I handle several tons of rampaging lizard with sharp teeth and a carnivorous bent (ignoring the fire)? Lots of lead, C4, and/or other highly effective anti-bunker weapons. Why? cause I've seen Stallone mow down dozens of men with a big gun. Harry may not have seen a whole movie, but he would have seen enough to know guns rock. Let a dragon chase me through the air? Not bloody likely!
And hell yes! Hurt Mermione?! Prepare to die villain/cult/country/world/universe/god!
- Right the hell on, man! I've laughed more times through this story than I have in a long time. I look forward to what more comes our way. As far as psycotic!harry goes, keep it coming! I wouldn't do things any differently. Ignore me, and I'll ignore you. Fuck with me or mine, and a short sharp death is the best you can hope for.
(#) Staryfury0901 2018-07-22Fumblewhore wanted a puppet but what he got would make Godzilla runaway crying for his mommy! He doesn't seem to realize that Harry's first target could very well be the one Harry feels is responsible for whatever happened to Hermione. And the very first target would very likely be Riddle to escape very quickly followed by Fumblewhore the great himself.
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