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Jump in with me.
2 reviews["Why?" she asked futilely. She knows we both know she's already aware of the answer but she asks the question anyway.] The hardest question to answer is always "Why". House likes the pleasure of w...
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Detox[ification]
(#) extrabitter 2006-04-13
Cool perspective. The sentence fragments work here; normally that's one of my pet peeves.
In a couple of places you have homophones -- "fore boarding," which should probably be "foreboding" and "minuet" seems like you meant "minute." Spell check won't catch that stuff.
This is a good idea, and I enjoyed the story.Author's response
Thank you for catching those mistakes :]
I never got this fanfic edited by somebody specifically because, as you said, all the sentence fragments and overall murder of grammatical structure makes me cringe, but worked for the story. (Although I regret not having it edited afterall)
I am glad you enjoyed it.
Detox[ification]
(#) doc 2006-05-18
I really enjoyed the atmosphere in this; it's wonderfully descriptive and makes it so very real for me. And although I can't picture Cameron crying about that (to me, she'd be just like she was during that one scene in that episode; angry), the last word of this story is just so... so... House! That and "and no I'm not addicted" is just something he'd say, too. Great job. :)
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