(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-08If Frank fucks this up; I'll probably never forgive him. Probably... Okay- no, I could never stay mad at him, but I swear to God he better not give Mikey a come on... PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
Author's responseI don't think that anyone could ever stay mad a Frank. ;)
I'll try to update ASAP. I don't have school today so updating shouldn't be a problem.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-09Well, that was a cliffhanger. And that was an understatement. I like this story, it's really exciting and keeps you interested. What's creepy is that "That kid wouldn’t ask for a glass of water if he was on fire! He’s just too nervous and scared of upsetting anyone for his own good." reminds me of me...
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm pleased that you thought it was exciting, not boring!
You should never be afraid to ask for help when you need it, because everyone has the right to declare that they're not okay.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review! :)
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-09It always makes me happy when I see that you've updated. I haven't been reading much fanfiction at all lately with school and whatnot but I always look forward to reading your stories. Anyway, this chapter is really great. I like how it was in Frank's point of view this time. The scene where Mr. C and Frank were talking was very interesting. It was interesting to see Frank talk about what happened because he's had to had enough strength for 3 people to get through the weekend and he didn't have anybody to ask him how that affected him. Everything happened so quickly and unexpected problems kept coming about and it must have affected him in some way. It was a good idea to show what he felt. I also like how this was a time for him to kind of get his thoughts together and to sort them out. Of course when he met Mikey he thought that no one as nice and shy and cute as Mikey should get bullied like Mikey does, but now he hates the kids at his school even more for driving Mikey to believe he's worthless. He's so undeserving of the treatment he recieves and Frank can't help but want to protect Mikey. Also, he knows what it's like to get beaten and to get hurt, but Mikey gets it far worse than Frank ever has. I also like Frank's need to determime what he feels for Gerard and Mikey. If he feels the need to try to put the correct feeling for each Way brother, then of course he is confused. That or he hasn't really had much time to think about that over the weekend. I'm not sure which one. I really liked the ending. It shows that Frank really cares about him and wants nothing but the best for him because he believes that's what he deserves. He wishes Mikey could believe it too. Well, this is beautiful and well written and I love everything about it. Great job, as always.
Author's responseThank you very much; it's extremely uplifting that you look forward to reading what I write!
I'm really pleased that you liked this chapter, I kinda thought that Frank needed a bit of an outlet after his weekend. I think that Frank is quite confused at the moment about his feelings for Ways...
Thank you soooooooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely and detailed review; it really does mean a lot! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-09That is such a cliffhanger. I loved the chapter. I can't wait to see what Frank will do this time to make Mikey better (or at least kind of better) and to see what state Mikey is in. I loved the dialogue between Mr. Casey and Frank. Mr. C seems like a really nice guy and it was good of him to give him the day off. Update soon please!
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked this chapter!
Yeah, Mr C is a really nice guy. I kinda based him on my uncle.
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review! :)
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