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Chapter Fourteen
28 reviewsThe violence of brick walls, innocent and inoffensive slime, and the joys of metaphorical fucking...NEW CHAPTER UP, PLEASE R&R!! :D :D
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) GhostOfYouMW 2011-12-11
YES YES YES YES i love this.
you're such a good writer :f"Be My Detonator."
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2011-12-11
Are you going to kill Frank in the next chapter? With the hairdye? Don't, please. He's too awesome, I'm afraid. ON ANOTHER NOTE, woderfil chapter. Started laughing hysterically. Almost died. Go many strange looks. I'm a happy person now XD"Be My Detonator."
(#) MCR-BVB-PATD 2011-12-11
You are such an incredible writer, your stories make me so happy :D Update soon!
xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) aweirdtree 2011-12-11
oooooooh gooooooood, i just about died from laughter :'DDDDDDD fuuuuuuck, i mean, really XDDD how is it possible for someone to have that bad luck?? :DDD
thanks for this chapter - am already waiting for more! ^^ and great you're at least ending this story (: please do the same with "Trying to Escape the Inevitable"!"Be My Detonator."
(#) benzedrine_barbie 2011-12-11
SKJDDRF I love this so much. "Okay, I actually think Ray is trying to disappear down my stepsister’s throat...Attractive stuff." I died of laughter, seriously, it was so embarrassing. You're wonderful, I can't wait for the next update! xo"Be My Detonator."
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2011-12-11
THIS IS SO AMAZING!!! i like, died when i saw this chapter was over! Like, i CANNOT wait for the next chapter!! just asdfghjkl words do not describe. My only critique is, The Next Chapter isn't here so I dont know what happens. :3 UPDATE SOON or i might die xDD This story is just asdfghjkl amazing!!!!"Be My Detonator."
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-12-11
This is so hilarious. The reactions are just how they should be, and as always, it's very well written. :)
It made me laugh so much! XD
It's so amazing, seriously. I'll be waiting for your next update.. whenever that is:')
But oh no, only a few more chapters? I might just have to re-read the whole story, then x)"Be My Detonator."
(#) CypherDetonation 2011-12-11
Oh my God, I nearly died while reading this. It's just so funny. Amazing chapter, I can't wait until you update!
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