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Fallen Angels
0 reviews(Black veil brides story but no BVB Catagory :() who is the mystious young man in the middle of the crater in Christa's back yard
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A/N There needs to be a wider range of catagories in the celebs one hmmm but oh well this story is based from BVB's fallen angels video hope you like it Amy-Beth xx
A comet plummets to earth hitting with a barely audible crack, well inaudible to people far away but not to Christa a 18year old girl who lived in the hills where the comet smashed into the ground, as soon as christa spotted the comet out of her window she ran out to investigate, the thick greyish green smoke makes christa cough as she wafts the smoke away from her face, then a sudden flapping sound catches christa off guard causing her to tumble backwards into a small crater that a small piece of the comet caused “h-hello” christa whispered as she got back on her feet “w-who’s there?” she asked as she moved closer to the large crater where she was once again blinded by the greyish green smoke she moved inside the crater where she spotted a young man “h-hello” she moved closer to him she heard a light sobbing coming from the young man “a-are you ok?” she asked as she placed her hand on his almost bare shoulder, his clothes ripped and he had large scars on his back where the largest slashes in his t-shirt were “yes I am fine leave me alone I don’t deserve company especially from a human” the young man shrieked at christa snapping his head round to stare at her,
she suddenly noticed how inhumanly beautiful he was, pale white skin, pale but strikingly shiny and piercing blue eyes, longish ebony hair slightly backcombed and gelled in certain places, a black lip ring on crimson red lips which clashed with the pale whiteness of his skin, she also noted his torn t-shirt was a the misfits band t-shirt, his piercing blue eyes were also outlined slightly with black eyeliner though there was something she felt like she’d missed attached to his back she had to note all of this quickly without making the young man angrier as she snatched her hand back from his shoulder “I-I’m sorry I was only trying to help” she whispered as she started to walk back to her house “I’m sorry I didn’t mean upset you or scare you” the young man called to christa “no, it’s not your fault it’s mine for poking my nose in where it’s obviously not wanted I’m once again sorry for that” she said after walking towards the strange young man again she seemed to be compelled to walk towards him even when she knew it was happening within her subconscious when she was once again close enough where she was in reaching distance of the young man she tried to note the strange black blurred structure attached to his back but in the inky black sky it was hard to make out what it was “do you want to come in, you must be starving and your clothes are in tatters I’m sure I could find you something from my brothers clothes” she paused when the young man looked shocked “oh, he doesn’t live with me anymore he missed our parents too much and moved back into the city” she smiled at the thought of her family “you miss them don’t you?” the young man asked softly studying christa’s reactions to him and his questions “yes, but I find it’s better to think of the good things rather than the bad the good being my childhood I spent with them and all the holidays we went on whereas the bad would be I hardly see them any more” christa frowned at her revelation “I’m sorry I’ve made you feel sad now haven’t I?” the young man questioned biting his lip slightly “no of course not, let’s get you some new clothes and some food shall we?” christa said perking up slightly “by the way what is your name, I’m Christa, but all my friends and family back in the city called me Chris” christa laughed slightly the young man smiled “I’m Andy I’m sorry I was very rude before wasn’t I?” Andy apologized once again “it’s fine really come on let’s get in side it’s getting cold out here I can tell because your shivering or is that because you have torn clothes on oh well come on” she stated after noticing Andy shiver slightly when she looked at his back again the strange black structure was gone,
“Is everything ok, Chris?” Andy asked Christa politely using the nickname she had mentioned “yeah, yeah I’m fine why were you in the crater in the first place?” she asked absentmindedly “sorry it doesn’t matter if you don’t want to tell me it’s just I get a bit nosy sometimes” she giggled lightly Andy smiled crookedly at her as they entered Christa’s home.
A comet plummets to earth hitting with a barely audible crack, well inaudible to people far away but not to Christa a 18year old girl who lived in the hills where the comet smashed into the ground, as soon as christa spotted the comet out of her window she ran out to investigate, the thick greyish green smoke makes christa cough as she wafts the smoke away from her face, then a sudden flapping sound catches christa off guard causing her to tumble backwards into a small crater that a small piece of the comet caused “h-hello” christa whispered as she got back on her feet “w-who’s there?” she asked as she moved closer to the large crater where she was once again blinded by the greyish green smoke she moved inside the crater where she spotted a young man “h-hello” she moved closer to him she heard a light sobbing coming from the young man “a-are you ok?” she asked as she placed her hand on his almost bare shoulder, his clothes ripped and he had large scars on his back where the largest slashes in his t-shirt were “yes I am fine leave me alone I don’t deserve company especially from a human” the young man shrieked at christa snapping his head round to stare at her,
she suddenly noticed how inhumanly beautiful he was, pale white skin, pale but strikingly shiny and piercing blue eyes, longish ebony hair slightly backcombed and gelled in certain places, a black lip ring on crimson red lips which clashed with the pale whiteness of his skin, she also noted his torn t-shirt was a the misfits band t-shirt, his piercing blue eyes were also outlined slightly with black eyeliner though there was something she felt like she’d missed attached to his back she had to note all of this quickly without making the young man angrier as she snatched her hand back from his shoulder “I-I’m sorry I was only trying to help” she whispered as she started to walk back to her house “I’m sorry I didn’t mean upset you or scare you” the young man called to christa “no, it’s not your fault it’s mine for poking my nose in where it’s obviously not wanted I’m once again sorry for that” she said after walking towards the strange young man again she seemed to be compelled to walk towards him even when she knew it was happening within her subconscious when she was once again close enough where she was in reaching distance of the young man she tried to note the strange black blurred structure attached to his back but in the inky black sky it was hard to make out what it was “do you want to come in, you must be starving and your clothes are in tatters I’m sure I could find you something from my brothers clothes” she paused when the young man looked shocked “oh, he doesn’t live with me anymore he missed our parents too much and moved back into the city” she smiled at the thought of her family “you miss them don’t you?” the young man asked softly studying christa’s reactions to him and his questions “yes, but I find it’s better to think of the good things rather than the bad the good being my childhood I spent with them and all the holidays we went on whereas the bad would be I hardly see them any more” christa frowned at her revelation “I’m sorry I’ve made you feel sad now haven’t I?” the young man questioned biting his lip slightly “no of course not, let’s get you some new clothes and some food shall we?” christa said perking up slightly “by the way what is your name, I’m Christa, but all my friends and family back in the city called me Chris” christa laughed slightly the young man smiled “I’m Andy I’m sorry I was very rude before wasn’t I?” Andy apologized once again “it’s fine really come on let’s get in side it’s getting cold out here I can tell because your shivering or is that because you have torn clothes on oh well come on” she stated after noticing Andy shiver slightly when she looked at his back again the strange black structure was gone,
“Is everything ok, Chris?” Andy asked Christa politely using the nickname she had mentioned “yeah, yeah I’m fine why were you in the crater in the first place?” she asked absentmindedly “sorry it doesn’t matter if you don’t want to tell me it’s just I get a bit nosy sometimes” she giggled lightly Andy smiled crookedly at her as they entered Christa’s home.
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