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Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) Lizzeh 2011-12-13
ohhhhh )': so sad. i hope Mikey can actually hear him cause he neeeeeedds to know it! and Frank you silly man. augh. you knew he was thinking suicidal and you didn't even go after him i mean whut?! silly silly silly.i wonder if Frank will tell Gerard about him hurting Mikey, i hope not he'll be destroyed! D:
as always, amazing chapter, and more cookies and an animal of your choice for you too!Author's response
Frank was being very silly, wasn't he?
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked this chapter! YAY; cookies and an animal!! I eagerly await the arrival of my panda. :P
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review; you've made me smile! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-13
awww! that's so sad! Mikey SO needs to hear everything gee said! please make him wake up and be okay. Like,SOON! and update soon please!Author's response
I'll try to update tonight. Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-13
Oh no. Wake up Mikey please! This such a cliffhanger. I hope mikey could hear Gerard cause he really needs to know that Gerard really does love him. This chapter is soooo good. Its like I don't want this story to end. It is just so sad yet heartwarming at times when Gerard is thinking about him. Update soon please!!!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you like this chapter, I wasn't too keen on it so it's nice to know that you thought it was good.
Although I am struggling with this a bit, I don't really want this to end; I think that I'll miss it, this is the longest thing that I've ever written after all even if it isn't the best.
I'll try to update ASAP!
Tgank you sooooo much for taking the time to review; it really does help! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-13
Oh no. Wake up Mikey please! This such a cliffhanger. I hope mikey could hear Gerard cause he really needs to know that Gerard really does love him. This chapter is soooo good. Its like I don't want this story to end. It is just so sad yet heartwarming at times when Gerard is thinking about him. Update soon please!!!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you like this chapter, I wasn't too keen on it so it's nice to know that you thought it was good.
Although I am struggling with this a bit, I don't really want this to end; I think that I'll miss it, this is the longest thing that I've ever written after all even if it isn't the best.
I'll try to update ASAP!
Tgank you sooooo much for taking the time to review; it really does help! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-13
Well you got to 'keep on, keepin' on..." talking to you not the characters... I've been struggling as well... I notice Frank calls Gerard Honey too... Hmmm. That's interesting. Mikey better make it through or I'm going to die. I MEAN it. Well. UPDATE SOON!Author's response
I'm glad that you picked up on Frank calling Gerard 'Honey', it was intentional and I'm pleased that you found it interesting.
I'll try to update tonight, homework permitting!
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-14
This is marvelous! I used that word because it seems like the word amazing is starting to lose it's meaning, and I most definitely mean when I say how great this is. Anyway, I really like this chapter. It's so well written and beautiful. You can really tell that Gerard wants to be a good brother. He's determined to do it right this time, not let Mikey get away again, but it's happened and Mikey is in the hospital and all he can do is hold his hand and hope he's okay. Even if he isn't Gerard will still love Mikey. Love him the way he wants and needs to br love. The way that Frank said Mikey needed to be loved. I love how Gerard hears a bit of guilt in Franks voice, wonders about it for all of a second, and then just goes back to hoping Mikey's okay and wanting Frank to come soon. He hasn't a clue what happened between Frank and Mikey so he didn't have a reason to think of why Frank sounded guilty. Maybe he just mistook Frank's tone to be one of guilt when it was really shock or sadness. Or maybe he didn't. He knows what guilt sounds like, his voice has had the same tone many times before. I don't know, but I really wanna find out. I hope this makes sense. I bet Gerard is like " I always disliked buses, but now I hate them. They hurt my Mikey. My baby brother Mikey." I can imagine Gerard saying that. Well, this is fabulous. It's well written and has strong emotion and it's just beautiful. I love it. Great job.Author's response
Thank you VERY much; your reviews are always so kind and lovely and detailed an I love them!
Yeah, I can imagine Gerard saying that too!
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such an awesomely nice review; you've made me smile! :)
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