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Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-19
This is awesome. I can't describe it. I'm useless at describing things to be honest. but this is just the best story on this site. I wonder how Frank and Gerard will react! By the way I love The Sims. The game is addicting. And I know Na Na Na in similar off by heart. When I saw it listed in the song option in settings I couldn't believe it. Anyway I love this chapter and I can't wait for more!Author's response
Thank you very much; I find it very touching that you would take the time to say such nice things about my crappy writing, it really does mean a lot!
I adore The Sims. I played it for hours today. I currently have Frank Iero, Mikey Way, Ryan Ross, my killjoy and Zacky Vengeance (as a toddler) living in one house. I truly fear for my sanity.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) KobraBlaze 2011-12-19
Sorry when I said 'similar' I meant Simlish. My iPod changed it :/Author's response
I feel your pain; I type all of my responses on my iPod (because of the virus warning thingy on my laptop). :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-19
this story is so franking sad! but since I like it so much...does that make me a sadist? cool!Author's response
If you're a sadist then what am I; I wrote this twisted crap! ;)
Thank you very much for taking the time to review; I'm glad that liked it! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-20
I TOTALLY CALLED IT!!!! DAMMIT, FRANK, YOU STUPID, INSANELY INNOCENT, IDIOTIC, DUMBASS!!! Fuck; I'm so pissed. Nothing to do but cuss out some unsuspecting pedestrian jay walking down mainstreet. Don't listen to me; I loved it anyway. GODDAMMIT FRANKIEEEE.... So peeved... Off. :oAuthor's response
Yep, Frank was being more than a little bit stupid/insane/idiotic/a dumbass in this chapter. But, as you also said, he was also kinda innocent in the respect that he never meant any harm.
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to review; it made me grin to myself like a madman! :DFate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-20
I TOTALLY CALLED IT!!!! DAMMIT, FRANK, YOU STUPID, INSANELY INNOCENT, IDIOTIC, DUMBASS!!! Fuck; I'm so pissed. Nothing to do but cuss out some unsuspecting pedestrian jay walking down mainstreet. Don't listen to me; I loved it anyway. GODDAMMIT FRANKIEEEE.... So peeved... Off. :oAuthor's response
Yep, Frank was being more than a little bit stupid/insane/idiotic/a dumbass in this chapter. But, as you also said, he was also kinda innocent in the respect that he never meant any harm.
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to review; it made me grin to myself like a madman! :DFate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-20
I TOTALLY CALLED IT!!!! DAMMIT, FRANK, YOU STUPID, INSANELY INNOCENT, IDIOTIC, DUMBASS!!! Fuck; I'm so pissed. Nothing to do but cuss out some unsuspecting pedestrian jay walking down mainstreet. Don't listen to me; I loved it anyway. GODDAMMIT FRANKIEEEE.... So peeved... Off. :oAuthor's response
Yep, Frank was being more than a little bit stupid/insane/idiotic/a dumbass in this chapter. But, as you also said, he was also kinda innocent in the respect that he never meant any harm.
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to review; it made me grin to myself like a madman! :DFate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-20
O god; I spammed your comment section... I know I'm doing it again; but I have to apologize that I did that... Fucking iPod....
Oh yeah; PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's response
Don't worry about it, I use my iPod for reviewing/responding so I know exactly what you mean, it's happened to me loads.
I'll try to update tonight, Christmas festivities permitting! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) CatscanFlyy 2011-12-20
._. This was so sad why can Mikey no see that he is le perfect human being? Also Frank should stop being so double timing It's not a good quality Franklin! Update soon! puuurrrrdy pleeeeaaaaseeeee!Author's response
I deffinitely agree with you; double timing is deffinitely not a good quality. I'm sure that Frank will realise that more pretty soon...
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-20
30th chapter!!! That's a lot of writing. Magnificent writing of course. Anyway, I really liked that this was in Mikey's point of view. It was interesting to hear snippets of the converstion between Gerard and Frank. I really like the fight Mikey was having with himself about whether he wanted to die or to live. I think it was a little bit of both. And also a little bot of neither. Of course death would mean he doesn't have to make Gerard worry about him and he won't have to hear Frank call Gerard 'Honey' and he won't have to be called terrible names ever again. Death is the quick escape he wants, but he doesn't deserve that. He deserves to be hear on earth where the other kids hit him and call him names and Frank pushes him away. But, he really just wants to live and have fun and not be so worthless, not just exist, not just be someone that everybody can hurt all the time. Now he's just taking up space that could be for someone better than him, someone who was important, someone who didn't stutter. If he did have the kind of life where one can have fun and all that stuff there's more possibility of getting hurt by people, no just Frank, not just Gerard, though he knows(thinks it couldn't have been any less of the truth) it was his fault that they hurt him. That's sorta why I think he wants to both live and die, but he also wants neither. It's not really a confusing concept, I just can't explain it well. I really liked how he blames himself for everything. It's his fault that Gerard and him had problems. He's the one that's the bad brother, he's the one that changed, not Gerard. Gerard's still a good big brother, a great one, but Mikey made him seem like a bad one because he needs so much protection and he's so selfish. In a way, he's kind of killed him, like you said in the story. I really liked this chapter. It's one of my favorites. Great job!!Author's response
Thank you very much!
YAY 30th chapter; this is deffinitely the longest thing I've ever written at just over 100,000 words. The next longest I've ever written is around 12,000 words so writing something this long is completely new to me; I just hope that it's not being dragged out!
Your interpritation of this was exacty what I was trying to get out through this chapter. He wants the pain to stop and he wants to start living a normal life; but he thinks the only way to stop the pain is to stop the life. He's kinda gone beyond just thinking that everything's his fault; it's like he knows it's his fault.
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-20
When I wrote in the parentheses I meant to put a period after thinks. Mikey believes it to be the truth, but in actuality it is far from it. I didn't want you to be confused. Sorry for commenting again.Author's response
Don't worry about it; thanks for stopping by again to let me know! :)
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