- Great as always! One tiny remark though: in French, nouns always come first, as in: centre magique commercial, instead of magique centre commercial. This, of course, is just a detail, and doesn't diminish the quality of your story at all.
Author's responseI appreciate the information. I don't speak French, so I had to use an online translator and muddle through as best I could. Now I know a little more about how to set up the phrasing. Thanks!!
- Excellent, wonderful you have an incredible way with words. I'm looking forward to read more. I wonder when dumble will figure out fawkes has abandoned him. Is there any more of the sorting hat coming? And how soon can you get harry to the healer at St mungo's. Just a few of the things i'm looking forward to reading.
- Awesome story, usually stay away from broad main character or plot lines especially with snape or remus (honestly don't know why just hate the first and ignore the second) but this is one intense nad well wrtten read that I hope continues, also great manipulative!dumbledore not over the top just a mean old man who dislikes people going agianst them, I admit to be a little worried about Tom but hope he remains an enemy or at least a friendly enemy (enemy of my enemy is my friend...until our enemy is dead and we go for each others throats).
Hope for more soon :)
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