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• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) PhoenixdorDragonclaw 2006-07-19

  Yeah I'm about halfway done with chapter six and noticed a re-occuring mistake in the french that you're using. When Remus is calling women "Mon Ami" he should be saying "Ma Amie" because that is the femine singular form of the verb and possive pronoun. That only bothers me because I just took French 3 Honors at the end of last school year. I would guess from this and other mistakes that I have spotted that you used an online translator right. I'm really enjoying your story, and I thought that you might want to know that. I'm also pretty sure that there are some other errors in your french but it is rather late(2:31 am) so I might have missed them.

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-09-02

  Interesting, this could be good reading.
  
  gunny

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) Mr7 2006-09-05

  You're writing a great story, I'm hooked on it. It's a pity you chose to take the "good snape" approach, I hate that character, and find it really ridiculous that he would have made friends with Lily or sworn to protect Harry... Other than that blemish on your story, so far it's great, and I hope the future has a quick death for snape, since I don't want to see him playing a good role in Harry's life.
  Still, keep up the excellent work, try to kill snape, and keep the updates coming!

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) twilliams1797 2006-10-08

  I am really liking this story and am certainly looking forwardx to seeing where it goes. its nice to read a chapter thats more than 1k words, and intellegently written.
  I also find it interesting to see the characters with more "depth" than most stories, I have read so many that are just5 putting the people in situations and having cliched responses..

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) bigmac 2007-12-29

  Hi great story any chance of a reload of chapters 7 & onwards as they are not loading keep up the good work

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) Kara456 2013-10-22

  I like the story so far, but chapters 7,8, and 9 won't load, so I can't read the rest! Would you please reload them so I can finish the story without a huge gap? Thanks so much!

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) motor 2017-04-24

  I like the story so far. My only problem is I'm not a fan of slash and though it hasn't am may not happen it does give off the vib.

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) EdTheBeast 2020-05-12

  This chapter is a sneaky, intense, almost tear jerker! This entire story, so far, is more believable and explains it more realistically.

• The Sleeping Dragon Wakes

  (#) EdTheBeast 2020-05-12

  The next three chapters seem to have been broken, as no words!

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