(#) tortillachip 2011-12-31I can assure you that this is anything but bad! Not many people do poems like this, but the ones I've seen aren't this good. I think doing poems like this are really clever, and this was done really well. At first I thought that this was set at a party because of the references to music. I just thought that he seemed shy because it could've been his first party or something, so the reader was supposed to imagine him sitting down with his own headphones like title says. I actually like the fact that it wasn't at a party. It just works better. Anyway, I really liked the way this was written. It was so beautiful and it was really interesting. It's really well done. I love this.
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm so pleased that you liked this! I love writing poetry more than any other type of fanfiction, so it's really nice to know that you liked reading this.
Thank you sooooooo much for taking the time to leave such a kind review! :)
(#) aweirdtree 2012-01-01haha, why is it so that every time i like some story (or poem) the author tells in the end that "yeah, i just made this out of boredom, sorry if it's crap." cause, seriously, this was just so beautiful. thank you! i loved the "or maybe not" in almost every, um, verse (or whatever they're called). i don't usually like poems in this site but this was absolutely amazing. the emotion and the situation are both very clear and whatnot... thanks still one more time! (:
Author's responseThank you very much for being so nice about my poem; you've made me smile like a mad-hatter! :D
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-02-07I think this is one of the most amazing poem-type things I've ever read. Beautiful. You're really fucking talented.
Author's responseAw, wow, thank you so very, very much! I'm really pleased that you liked it, it honestly does mean a lot. Thanks for taking the time to review! :)
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