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• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-31

  four words: Gerard's a female dog.
  I have to say, i expected both of them to be fully clothed, but i still really like this chapter. Gerard's not gonna scare pete away, right? That would fu- i mean Frank everything up.
  OXO

  Author's response

  Yes, I don't know who needs a leash more in this story; Misfit or Gerard.
  Sorry if it seemed unbelievable/out of character, I wasn't sure about it myself but I'm planning on kinda explaining it in the next chapter if that makes any kind of sense...?
  As for Gerard scaring Pete off... You'll have to wait and see...
  Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) fearsgottahold 2011-12-31

  OH MA GOD, the cliffhanger!!! I am so going to be checking this site as often as possible to see if you've updated, cos damn, that was a good chapter! Thank you, you amazing person.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much; I'm so pleased that you thought this chapter was okay! I'll probably update tonight.
  Thank you very much for taking the time to review; you've made me smile! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) tortillachip 2011-12-31

  Wow. I definitely did not expect that. That's a good thing of course, and I just really liked it. I didn't expect Pete to be shirtless and on top of Mikey, I kinda thought that it would be one sweet kiss and then while they share their first kiss Gerard will come in and see them and expect the worst. I did not see that coming. I really liked how the restaurant scene went. If there was an actual problem I can imagine Frank with his teeth clenched and his hands balled into fists and like "If you don't get me away from this girl I swear I will punch her in the face." Of course he wouldn't do that, but the thought crossed his mind. I also really liked that Gerard is coming up with reasons not to tell Mikey about their mother's birthday because he believes that it would be better if Mikey didn't know. Then he's saying that he's trying to be what Mikey wants him to be, but he's doing the same thing that caused Mikey to run away prequel. He's trying to do what he thinks is better, but they aren't going to get anywhere if they don't talk about things, as Frank has stated. Frank is so reasonable and he's always there to let Gerard know that he needs to think about someone besides himself and he's always there for Mikey. It was also really interesting to see that Gerard resents Mikey because Frank seems to cares about him more sometimes. Gerard just doesn't see that Frank kinda sorta knows more about what Mikey needs than Gerard does. Also, when Gerard said that it's like Frank is more of a brother he's like "Mikey used to be this Mikey used to be that" but he doesn't realize that he changed too. He's like trying too hard to make things as close to what they were like before, but why does he remember of it? And how does he know Mikey changed that much at all? He was drunk for a long time. This stays true to Gerard in the prequel and I'm glad he didn't change much. It really adds a lot to the story and makes it really interesting. I really loved this chapter. It was really interesting to see it in Gerard's point of view and I really liked the last few lines. I can't wait for the next chapter.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much, I'm relieved that you liked it; I wasn't all that sure about this chapter (especially the ending) so it's really reassuring to know that you think it went alright. I'm really sorry if the kiss-thing was unrealistic to who the characters are and if it didn't fit right, I wasn't too sure about it myself but I'm planning of explaining it in the next chapter.
  I'm glad that you liked the resturaunt scene, I wanted to show that Mikey still does get picked on by the general public and how it effects him/how Gerard and Frank deal with it.
  It's good to know that you liked how Gerard was trying to justify not saying anything and how he hasn't really changed his ways from what they were in the prequel. It's kinda like he's learnt but he isn't using what he's learnt in a helpful way and he still thinks that he knows what is best, I hope that came across in this.
  I wanted Frank to be the voice of reason in this story, the one kind of controlling Gerard to make him do all of the things that he should be doing.
  I tried to keep this Gerard true to how I portrayed him in the prequel, so I'm really pleased that you picked up on that/think it works.
  The next chapter should be up tonight.
  Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a kind, helpful review; it really does mean a lot! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) asialovesrevenge 2011-12-31

  AMAZING. I escepcially loved the line saying that Mikey and Frank's tears were like lighter fluid for Gerard, that was beautiful. I love that Mikey and Pete are moving along in their relationship, it's really great and awesome and perfect :D and poor Gee, he needs to get his shit together or Mikey is gonna get hurt real bad :C are you gonna write from Frank's pov in this story or stick with Gerard, Mikey, and Pete? aah, I can't wait for more :D

  Author's response

  Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you think this chapter went alright!
  I'm relieved that you think Mikey and Pete's relationship is moving along alright, I really wasn't at all sure that I was doing that in a halfway decent way; so thanks for reassuring me with that,
  Gee deffinitely needs to get his shit together. Quickly.
  I'm going to start including Frank's POV in around two chapters time (I've kids got this all planne out), if you think that'd work?
  Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) MCRmilify 2012-01-01

  Well fuck.
  Why does Gerard insist that he knows everything about Mikey?
  Why did he automatically assume that Mikey didn't like the position he was in?
  Gerard needs to suck it up and realize he doesn't know his brother anymore, and then actually make an effort at restoring their relationship.
  I hope Frank gets his scrawny butt up to Mikey's room before Gerard or Pete does anything stupid.

  Author's response

  I completely agree with all that you have just said; Gerard does need to suck it up and try to actually do the right thing for once instead of doing what he wants to be the right thing.
  Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-01

  Happy new year!
  I just get so mad at Gerard when he thinks that he knows everything. He needs to stop making assumptions and just talk to Mikey about everything-including Pete. That's what they need, a good talk.
  But Frank best be there because Gerard is going to kill Pete if Frank doesn't step in.

  Author's response

  I agree; Gerard needs to calm down, stop assuming things and just have a good talk with Mikey. That may be what needs to happen, but not neccessarilly what will happen...
  Don't underestimate Pete, he deffinitely knows how to stand up for himself (and Mikey)...
  Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-01

  Really great chapter! The description was amazing, along with everything else, and the tension and excitement of this story just gets better and better and grows and grows!
  Gerard needs to stop thinking he knows everything and should see what Mikey ACTUALLY wants instead of guessing. They need to talk and see, or both of their sakes. Gerard's driving himself insane and Mikey's just depressed. Oh, poor him:(
  oh, and if breaks Pete's face, someone (ahem, me) is going to have a fit. XD
  But this was an amazing chapter :)

  Author's response

  Aww, thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you think this chapter is alright and not too dull/rushed/crappy.
  Yeah, Gerard does need to just stop and actually see things, talk about things and then fix things rather than just guessing like he has been.
  I'm sure that Mikey won't be too happy either if Gerard breaks Pete's face, and I doubt that Pete would just let that happen; he knows how to take care of himself. If it comes to that...
  Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)

• Perfectly Imperfect

  (#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-01

  I swear to god if Gerard breaks Pete's face I will break him. But it was nice to see Gee and Frank again, even if Gerard is as clueless as ever. Pete's actualy some kind of inside joke between me and my friends, not sure just how it started but at new years we all had our photot taken with his poster ~ irellevent anecdote. So happy new year! this chapter was awesome and I loved the repitition it made Gerard's thought prossess more real. Gahh so exited for the next chapter I must find out what happens!

  Author's response

  I'm feeling very scared for Gerard at the moment; let's just hope that I am merciful and don't have him
  break Pete's face...
  I was kinda missing Gee and Frank, so I found it nice to see them again too.
  Sounds like an awesome New Year's! I was stuck inside with a cough so I just partied in the company of my MCR and FOB (including Pete Wentz) posters.
  Thank you very much; I'm really happy that you think this chapter went alright and that I made Gerard's processes realistic. I was kinda worried that it wasn't consistent so it's nice to know that you think it went alright!
  The next chapter should be up later tonight.
  Thank you for taking the time to review! :)

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