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Are We There Yet?
5 reviewsSo, we're at the Yule Ball. Yep. In the last several paragraphs of the story, we're at the Yule Ball.... I was a horrible writer, okay? And I'm still not good enough to clean it up, so enjoy.
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The Yule Ball- The Remake
(#) jediprankster 2012-01-13
This story is listed as complete. Is it really done? It doesn't seem that way. I really wanted to see what was going to happen to Ron and Ginny when they learn what has happened to them. I also wanted to see what happens to everyone else. Especially the Harem.
That was exceptionally cruel to do the Ron and Ginny, but they deserve it. I would also like to see the fallout when Arthur and Molly learn what has happened.
I hope the story was marked as complete by mistake.The Yule Ball- The Remake
(#) wsraptor 2012-01-19
I agree that this story shouldn't be done yet. I keep wondering what's going to happen during the second task, third task, Voldy's return, etc... Please continue this!!!The Yule Ball- The Remake
(#) LabRat 2012-10-08
darn, i was hoping for the harem. you ever thought about doing a take two for this where hermione insists on the harem. would certainly be funny seeing gin's reaction when she realises what she could have had but passed on.The Yule Ball- The Remake
(#) LabRat 2013-02-25
i wonder if the voice in his head couldn't have been a harry from the future helping him along.The Yule Ball- The Remake
(#) Shadowevar 2014-09-17
I think the voice in his head is his mother's.
This story really needs a great complete ending. I for one would love to know what Rihaan was planning for an ending by completing this story. So few great works are ever completed in fan fiction that it would be nice to see another real good piece finished properly.
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