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Who Are You?
8 reviews"I’m nothing but a faded memory in the moonlight." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Guardian Ghost
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-17
I really like this chapter. It sort of... I don't know I guess shows Frank learning about Mikey's past and at the end it seems like Frank is willing to give Mikey a chance if not for Mikey's sake than for himself for fear of Gerard doing something too him. That's what I think anyway. I don't know if I got it totally right! I really enjoyed it though. Im looking forward to more. So update when you can please!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you liked this chapter!
You got it pretty much spot-on, it's all kind of open to interpretation anyway. The aim of this chapter was to get Frank to know a little bit more about Mikey and for him to be a little bit more sympathetic towards him, so I hope that came across.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) tortillachip 2012-01-17
This is great!!! I really like this idea. I was hooked from the prologue, even if I didn't review, and everything that's happened so far really has me wondering what's going to come next. I also like Frank this way. I like him as friendly and loving and caring too, but I don't know what it is about him being a "bad boy" that works. I like that here. I think it'll add more to the story than him being kind and understanding and all. In chapter one I really like that you kind of see that Frank doesn't want the life that the other kids see as perfect. He starts to think about how it's great and all that he's popular but maybe that isn't really what he wants. Maybe he just doesn't want to be lonely so he crowds himself with people, but it's a different kind of company he wants. It's like what Gerard says in this chapter. I liked that Gerard could tell what kind of person Frank is just by watching him a few times. I guess maybe a ghost doesn't have much to do so they watch and analyze and all that. I really liked that, while Frank is smart, it doesn't seem like he'd always do what he knows is right and his reasoning to do things is really odd, but it makes sense. I thought that was really interesting. Like, when I read chapter one where Frank was talking about how he felt when Mikey ignored him, I didn't think much about it because he was explaining what it was that annoyed him. When I read this chapter with Gerard saying that Frank must be conflicted because his actions didn't make sense. I realized that his reasoning made sense, but was a little wacky. Frank's logic makes a lot of sense to him, but to other people it may seems as if he did things for no reason at all. I like that about this story. It really confirms that he is smart, maybe he doesn't know how to channel his intelligence in the right way, but maybe Gerard and Mikey can help him with that. I really liked that Gerard knows full well that Frank is conceited, but also believes that he could really help Mikey and Mikey could help him too. They both need help and they both need each other, even if they don't really know it yet. Mikey isn't just not talking because he wants to be difficult, he's really been affected by what happened. Someone needs to understand that. I'm glad it was Frank's mom, but I hope he doesn't offend her or something and he doesn't keep to himself all the time. Well, this is really great. I don't know why you don't like this chapter, I think it's really well written and it really shows what Gerard thinks about Frank and Mikey right now. There's nothing wrong with this chapter. I can't wait to see all that comes with this story. Wonderful job!!!
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo glad that you think this is alright!
I'm relieved that you like this idea, it's different from what I normally write in the respect that I've never done anything supernatural-ish, so it's really good to hear that you like the idea.
I'm pleased that you like Frank's character. I wanted him to be someone who thinks that he has everything because his life is what most people perceive as perfect, but in reality he is very lonely because nobody knows the real him, maybe not even he does. Frank isn't stupid, he does the know the right way to behave in different situations and the right thing to do but that doesn't necessarily mean that he will do it.
You've pretty much hit the nail on the head with Frank's personality in this; he has his reasons, even if they don't make sense to other people, and he'll act on them even if he knows he's in the wrong. But I don't think that he ever actually wants to hurt other people in any way. Frank is smart, he just needs someone to show him that he doesn't have to pretend to get others to like him.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a friendly, detailed review; it really does help me write! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-17
Yay, more of your writing to read! :D I love it, I can't wait for more. It's so exciting! :3Author's response
Thank you very much! :DGuardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-17
Yay, more of your writing to read! :D I love it, I can't wait for more. It's so exciting! :3Guardian Ghost
(#) tyyneyy 2012-01-18
Well, now we have reached the point where Frankie will hopefully see what a treasure he has in his house, and, hopefully, things are going uphill from here. :)
But there are always small bends on the way, right?
I'm really excited! Lisää, kiitos!Author's response
We can but hope that things will start getting better... I wouldn't hold your breath though because there will definitely be a fair few bends along the way!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-18
LOVE. Lovelovelovelovelove. That's a lot of love, and I feel it deserves even more. I really, really enjoyed this chapter, and I actually loved how Frank reacted when Gerard told him what he really was. I loved how Gerard told Frank exactly what had happened to him, and then broke down in tears. This was such an amazing and beautiful chapter, and I have decided that this fic (even though its only on chapter 2) is one of my favourites ever. Yep, that's pretty high and mighty coming from me, cos I read a LOT of them:) please update soon!Author's response
Thank you so very much; I'm sooooo glad that you like this! I wasn't too sure about it because I've never really written a supernatural-ish story before and this chapter was really hard to write, so to hear that you liked it really does mean a lot!
Thank you soooooooooo much for taking the time to leave such a kind review; you've made me smile (which is a great achievement considering I had to sit my chemistry GCSE paper today and failed miserably)! Thanks! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-18
Fantastic! Gerard sure showed him! -sassyarmmovement- awesome chapter can't wait for more!Author's response
Yep, Gerard gave Frank a piece of his mind.
Thank you very much, I'm sooo pleased that you think this chapter is alright, and the next chapter will be up tonight! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-18
I'm so glad Gerard is being so protective towards Mikey. And Frank is finally coming around and becoming the right sort of person.
My reviews stopped being in any way productive chapters and chapters ago so from now on they're gonna have to be shorter with considerably more keyboard smashes to make up for lost words xDAuthor's response
I'm glad that you're glad; I love writing Gerard as protective over Mikey, so I'm pleased that you're glad he's that way in this.
Every review is productive to me as they always motivate me to write more.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
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