Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Guardian Ghost
Soothing the Storm
7 reviews"My own adorable little challenge." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
2Ambiance
Reviews
Guardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-26
asdfghjkl;lkjhgfdsa :D
You are just too amazing, you know that? This is so great. And it's just perfectly sweet and happy and awesome xD I'm kinda expecting something bad to happen, like Gerard not liking Frank loving Mikey or not trusting him to keep him safe. Or even Frank giving up or leaving Mikey :O That would be horrible but make an awesome story xD Excited for the rest!Author's response
Aw, thank you very much; I'm sooooo pleased that you think this is alright!
I kinda wanted this chapter to be happier than what I normally right because, well, let's call it the 'calm before the storm'. Because something bad will happen, maybe not in immediately, but nothing I write can ever stay too happy for too long...
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-26
Wow wow wow! I didn't expect him to kiss Mikey so soon in the story. You're an excellent writer! You really are. I loved how Mikey smiled at the end. It was so sweet. How long will it last though? I have a feeling Gerard isn't going to like this (?) I don't know but I can't wait to find out so update soon! Excellent job!Author's response
I wasn't too sure about having the first kiss at this point in the story, so I apologize if it was kinda wrong/crappy.
Thank you very much, it's really lovely to know that you think that I'm an alright writer!
You're right; this won't last for too long...
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-26
I love it! They kissed!!!! :))) omg!! I love it oh so much! Excellent chapter. Your an amazing writer. I live it so much. CANNOT wait to read the next chapter!!!Author's response
Thank you soooo much; I'm extremely happy that you liked it!
The next chapter will probably be up tonight.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-27
So I do the one thing that I know will keep him quiet; I kiss him
The moment when my thoughts went from 'yaaay she's updated' to 'asddusialefguesugesluigesguesdigseio'
Frank is such a cutie :3
Awesome chapter you've put me in a really good mood! C:Author's response
Aw, I'm really glad that this put you in a good mood!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-28
Gah I very nearly missed this update because I went to the Panic concert last night. But this was an amazing chapter and I know we all were sighing with relief when Frank kissed Mikey. But what's Gerard's reaction gonna be?
This managed to get me into a much better mood! I've been moping around and crying randomly all morning because I wasn't allowed to go and meet Panic after the concert. The bus was RIGHT THERE as well. I could see the crowds of people waiting at the barrier from the car. One day I will meet a band. One day.Author's response
Wow, you're soooo lucky that you got to see P!ATD; I wanted to see them at Southampton, but I'm not allowed to go. I bet they were amazing... :)
Anyway, thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you think this chapter is alright! I'm very glad that it put you in a better mood and I know exactly what you mean; I'm going to see All Time Low on Thursday and my aunt has already told me that there is no way on this Earth that I'm gonna meet 'em.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) tortillachip 2012-01-29
This was so amazing!!! I have missed so much, but I'm so glad to be back. I hope to never be gone for that long again. I suffer from withdrawal when I don't read good fanfiction. I'm just kidding. Well, sort of. Anyway, this was a marvelous chapter. I know Frank's true feelings were revealed in earlier chapters, but he's only just put a name to it, though he probably already knew it. He didn't want to admit it in fear of his friends finding out and being made fun of, but I'm glad that in this chapter he seems to have forgotten about them. Mikey is so much more important to him than those jerks he was stupid enough to call "friends" and now that he has Mikey, he probably won't be needing them to make him feel important. Or should I say hopefully? You can't tell what Frank's going to do. Is he going to stay with Mikey, or will he choose his friends? Will he keep Mikey safe, or will he stay in the bathroom like he did last time? I think that's what I like about him here. That element of unpredictability really keeps the readers on their toes. You kind of have to expect the unexpected with this story, but even when something surprising happens, you think 'Oh my gosh, I can't believe it!!!' Those things are what make good writing. I totally had one of those 'I can't believe it!' moments when I read the part when Frank kissed Mikey. I was kind of like "Finally!!!" But when Frank was questioning the kiss I was like "Please don't let anything bad happen!" I'm so glad it didn't. Anyway, I really wonder what will happen between them now. Frank has finally kissed the lips that have been haunting him for what seems like the longest time, and obviously Mikey was happy about it, but will there be anything more? And what will Gerard say? So many questions!!! I can't wait to read more to find out all the answers. I really liked that Mikey had a panic attack. I know it sounds weird, but when he had his attack he was cared for in the cutest way possible. Frank just wants to protect him, and I'm a huge fan of protective Frank. I really liked that Frank can be himself around Mikey. Not the one that he is at school, but the one that's hiding underneath that one. The one that accepts that people are different and probably prefers the different ones anyway. This one can't stand his "friends" and the other people at his school because they're all the same. There's nothing special about them, but Mikey is...different. And Frank likes him. I just wonder if he'll still like him at school. I thought this chapter was amazing!!! Well, I liked all the chapters that I haven't reviewed. Anyway, this was so great and you have a real talent for writing. I absolutely 100% love this. Great job!!!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really relieved that you think this is alright, I'm definitely struggling with this story more than I have with anything else that I have written.
I think that you're definitely right to say 'hopefully'. I haven't planned that far ahead so things might not be this nice for Mikey at school...
I'm glad that you think this is unpredictable, I'm usually really cliched or obvious so to hear that this is keeping you on you toes is really cool.
I know what you mean about liking the panic attack; I kinda liked writing it because I love hurt Mikeys and protective Franks more than anything.
Thank you soooooo much for taking the time to leave such a kind and detailed review! :)
Sign up to review this story.