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Disenchanted
9 reviews'Trapped in this tiny space suffocated with a million wasted wishes......' PLEASE READ?!
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Disenchanted
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-02-03
Oh my lord this is so extremely beautiful. It's very very astounding and I love the detail that's implanted. I also love the repetition halfway through the poem; it's really effective and just spoke very strongly to me. You're a very talented writer, and this is beautiful. I have a feeling you'd be absolutely outstanding at writing lyrics.. you ever tried it?Disenchanted
(#) ImJustFine 2012-02-04
Hey! This was really amazing, I love how your language is so, don't get me wrong here, but simple, yet powerful and touching. This was beautiful and I honestly think you should write more poetry. You're very talented :)
- ImJustFineDisenchanted
(#) inthemourning 2012-02-05
I totally love it. As simple as that. It could be an amazing song also, have you ever tried writing lyrics? XoxDisenchanted
(#) KITTEHZ 2012-02-07
It was touching. Really, I would like to say more, but I has sports (remind me why I do them?)
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