(#) KobraBlaze 2012-02-06This is excellent! I have only ever read a couple of Rikey stories because there isn't much of them but this is by far the sweetest. I love one shots like these because they are filled with Mikey's thoughts. I liked the ending with the text and the X at the end and Mikey saying It's just a kiss. I really liked also how you linked Gerards problem of going out and kissing people with the title Just A Kiss. It all tied in really well. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the great work!
Author's responseThank you very much!
There aren't really that many Rikeys out there, which is why I thought that it'd be fun to write my own. I was worried that with the majority of it (with the exception of the text) being just Mikey's thoughts it would get boring, so it's a relief to know that you like that kind of thing!
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)
(#) TERRIBLETEEN 2012-02-06This is AWESOME i luuuuuuv may writing and please second chapter ? ill be waiting
TT seal of approval.
Author's responseThank you very much! I think that this is better as a one-shot, but if I think of anything I'll make it a two-parter.
Thanks for reviewing! :)
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-02-07CAN WE ALL JUST STOP FOR A MOMENT. THE ENTIRE WORLD, YES.
YOU, MY FAVOURITE FANFIC WRITER, HAS WRITTEN A RIKEY. YOU'VE WRITTEN MY ALL TIME OTP.
TWO SHOT. SERIES. ONE SHOT. I DON'T CARE BECAUSE YOU WROTE A RIKEY AND IT WAS AMAZING.
Author's responseTHANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH; T'M SOOOOOOOOOOO GLAD THAT YOU THOUGHT IT WAS ALRIGHT! XD
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a sweet review, you've made me smile! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-02-07Sorry for commenting again but I read the story again and saw the question about the two shot and yes I would definitley read. Probably because you wrote it and your excellent at these Mikey/Whoever stories. So yeah it would be awesome if you made it a two shot.
Author's responseThanks for taking the time to respond to the new author's note; I think that I will make this a two-shot, maybe not for a few days, but there will be a second part to this at a later date.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review again! :)
- ahhhhhhh Rikey's the best
thank you for writing this omg
two-shot PLEASE this is great
Author's responseYep; Rikey is pretty much amazing.
You're very welcome, thanks for reading it! And I think that this will be a two-shot, but it might take a few days for the second part to materialize.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-02-12Oh god, yes, please make this a two shot that would be awesome. im typing this in the dark, and its really fucking difficult, but jesus, i need to get this out now. please carry on with it, i thinks its fucking awesome!
Author's responseThank you very much; I will try to make this a two-shot at some point in the near future.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)
(#) snake56tongue 2012-02-13Gasp Gasp Gasp ....
Okay, I think I am in love with this....
It is just so adorable, yet angsty (is that a word?), and heartwarming and breaking at the same time!
How are you so amazing?!?
Also, this is the first Riley I have read... And it is incredible :)
Now, I have a bone to pick with you. You have to stop putting yourself down!! You nearly always end your stories apologising about how 'crap' they are, when they are from it! Seriously, woman! They are fabulous!! You're like, one of my favourite ever writers!! What does that say about everyone else, if you are crap?
Okay, rant over, I was just trying to convince you how awesome you are :)
Write a two-shot!! Please?!? I wanna see what happens!! Pretty please?! With sprinkles on top?!
Good. Finally ..... this is incredible!
Author's responseThank you very much!!!
I'm soooooo pleased that you liked this!
I'm really not amazing, I'm just some weird fifteen-year-old with an insatiable addiction to writing. Writing and raisins...
Thank you sooooo very much for your rant; you've really made me smile and feel all fuzzy inside.
I'll try my hardest to make this a two-shot when possible.
I shall end this response the same way that I started it; Thank you very much!!!
(#) MCRnum1fan97 2012-02-18hey i love this story so far and cant wait to read more of it also i agree withsnake6stongue this website wouldnt be as good as it is now if it didnt have the products of your awsome 'insatiable addiction to writing' im so very greatfull for it i srated writing a story a little while ago if you could read it or give me some tips it would be great it would be even more great if you did both. as always your truly awsome!
Author's responseThank you very much; to hear such nice things about my writing really does make my day!
I will be sure to check out your story and do both!
Thank you soooo soooooooo soooooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)
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