But the ribbons of his disguise are starting to fray slightly at the edges.
Omg yay,first one to rate and review. ;D
Awh,loved this chapter! This story is fucking amazing,and I kinda feel like I can relate to Frank in a way:3..
Please update soon,and keep up the good work!:D
As a guitar player, I know exactly what you're talking about when you describe Frank's emotions towards it. Absolutely amazing. Wow this was great. Please update soon! And p.s. I think you're a very strong person, because you're always talking about your tests and school work and illness and you're a true inspiration. You write great stories and just wow. Ok now I'm sounding crazy. But really thanks for updating!
thank you so much for this chapter! it was really good, i loved every second of it (: your way of writing is something one can easily read and also relate to the characters - thanks for that! i'll be impatiently waiting for more :p
wow I loved the way you convey the emotions of playing music, it's deep.
but oh lordy it's Ocean! he will not take that well!
thanks for such a great update, I need more! xo
Aww... You and your insane cliff hangers destined to try and carve out my heart with a dull stick of eyeliner... Dammit. Just when I thought things were getting better. :/ Man. Update when ya can, kay? :D
YOUR CLIFFHANGERS!? :( The suspense is killing me. Write new chapter soon pleeaaaaassssseeeeee ??? :D
oh dear. the suspense kills me so bad every time i finish a chapter. please update soon. put it this way, this is like my personal bible.
absolutely brilliant. i cant describe how much of an excellent read this is.
wow. once again, pure amazing. this is definately one of the best things i read (next to Be My Detonator :3)
update soon xxxxx
The first thing I thought after reading is that perhaps Ocean is a trader. Not that this is war but still. She can't be though....can she? That would be terrible. Frankie would be devastated. I think I would cry. Or is she there to bring them together. Ahhhhhh all the possibilities. Also I love how moving and descriptive Franks music was. I just hope it makes Gerard stop underestimating him.
Fan-fucking-tastic as usual :) That phrase you used, watery gold or something like that, was really beautiful. See, I read closely...real closely. Anyway, these risks you've been taking have really paid off and the last few chapters of this and BMD have been awesome, keep up the good work! xo
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