(#) monstrice901 2012-02-29I only just read this, and it is really good! As with the previous two, I'm glad you've made Bert nice - it always kinda bugs me how much of a jerk he is in most stories.
You portrayed it really well, and I like the whole idea! Did Gerard really get beaten up though when he was wearing make-up like that? I've never heard that before, but it'd make sense.
Thanks for writing!
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