(#) Black_Poison_Heart 2012-02-13Wow... Fancy house! hve only seen places like that in Oz in some millionaire area in Sydney. I saw that there were some rich-bitches who lived on one of the few hills in Townsville too... Dad called it Snob Hill XD
Well, i hope for Mikeys sake that the ghost is nice! And you HAVE to bring back Gerard! DX
cant wait for more!
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-02-15Is the ghost Frank? I feel it's Frank. Now cause I've said this it wont be but whatevs I'm going looking for Frikey wherever I can find it!
Anyhoo now onto actualy reviewing something that might mean something to you....
I love your descriptions and the way you're not rushing the chapters they flow nicely and you get to know everyone at a natural pace. I also love how you include seemingly un important things that really make the story feel real.
I can't wait till your next update this story is so great!
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