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Reflections
3 reviewsAfter the devastating events in the Department of Mysteries, Harry once again finds himself alone at Privet Drive. How will he survive without his friends to protect him from others and from himself?
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The Greatest Power
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-06-26
I see we're continuing with his depression? Sensible enough, but it'll get boring if you keep it up for too long. I hope he gets to Grimmauld soon.
That being said, I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit. I thought you portrayed both Aunt Petunia and Mrs. Weasley very well.
Looking forward to the next chapter.The Greatest Power
(#) BenRG 2006-06-28
The thing that has stood out in this story so far is your portrayal of Molly Weasley. She is too often basically a walking stereotypical 'mum'. Here, you put thoughts into her head and let us understand the woman a little better than other fanfics. You also manage to get the children just that - children. Too often, fanfics make the main characters far too mature for their age.
Harry seems to be having a particularly bad time of it in this story.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10The Greatest Power
(#) HallowsNotHorcruxes 2010-02-18
Love the story so far, I thibk you captured Mrs. Weasley perfectly. I also like how you had Harry lie, I thought that was very probable.
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