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Always On My Mind
3 reviewsFrerard. Gerard is attracted to a good-looking mysterious boy he finds in a music store. Gerard isn't sure that the young man loves him back. Meanwhile, Mikey is obviously crushing on the store cle...
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Always On My Mind
(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-03-13
Naw- it doesn't suck! But on the contrary, your sentences were sort of short and choppy. :/
Not many other problems, and it was actually really good for your first time on here! :) a lot better than some crap on here... Lol.Always On My Mind
(#) XxMCRfreakxX 2012-03-13
Thanx Mikeys Glasses. ^_^ Yeah. I agree that my sentences were messed up. lol I wrote that last December. .o. I think that in the later chapters it isnt that choppy. But yeah. Thanks for noticing and I will check for that in my upcoming chapters. :)Always On My Mind
(#) ArsenicRainbowDash 2012-07-02
HOLYFUCKINGGERARDSHIT YOU. ARE. AN. AMAZING. WRITER.
DON'T YOU EVER LIE TO ME AGAIN.
XDDD
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