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• The Halo Files

  (#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-03-13

  Ooh-- are we gonna find out more about Frank? And what's up with Gerard? Hm... I wanna know, so
  Please update soon!

  Author's response

  All in good time, my dear ;) I don't know, there's a whole lot of crazy going on in this fic...thanks, glad you like it! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) SimplexMinded 2012-03-13

  i have a stage attratcion to Gerard as a murder. Especally the way you've portrayed him. I feel bad for him. I feel like he doesn't like to kill but he cant stop. I feel like he wan't so badly to be normal and he feels like death is the only way to escape himself......but look at me being all phycso-analisis :)

  Author's response

  No, psychoanalyzing is totally what this story's about, you're right :) I think it's hard to tell now, but later on you'll come to see there are reasons for everything he does. I definitely don't mean this to be all one-layer, I was actually hoping folks would read something more into it...I'm so glad you like it :D xoxo

• The Halo Files

  (#) Down-a-Rabbit-Hole 2012-03-14

  GAH! THIS IS BRILLIANT!
  This last chapter was frustratingly short - I am utterly desperate to know more!
  There is so much that makes me want the next chapter. Your writing style is poetic without being overbearing, a lovely balance that I find rare in any fan fiction. It makes reading this story incredibly engaging and I find myself drawn in to the point that I can get a very tangible idea of the personality of each character. Gerard and Frank have been fleshed out in wonderful detail - each are perfectly palpable and their responses are seamlessly natural within the context. Not to mention I don't think I came across a single grammatical error which is such a breath of fresh air, considering most writers on this website don't know how to string a simple sentence together.
  Please, I BEG you to write more! Your writing style is simply addictive!

  Author's response

  Wow, thanks! And what a coherent, elegantly phrased review :) I'm sorry the chapter's so short - my plans for each chapter are always pretty long and complex, so I end up writing a bit and then adding to it. Sorry if that's frustrating, but I'm so glad you like it! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) jujucopyright 2012-03-14

  I agree with Down-A-Rabbit-Hole
  :)

  Author's response

  Thanks! I'm flattered :)

• The Halo Files

  (#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-03-14

  me too:) god, please update soon D:
  note how i'm calling you god there...facepalm
  xk

  Author's response

  Haha, I saw that :) Thanks so much and I'll update soon, I'm on break so I have plenty of time to work. xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) ZombieSlayer13x 2012-03-14

  Oh my god I'm so in love with this story!!!! I love murder mystery books and this is JUST what the doctor ordered. It's intoxicating and....amazing...I really want to see where Gerard and Frank go in the story.
  
  Also, you're playlist is siccckkkkk I actually listen to it as I read the story blushes
  
  UPDATE SOOONNNNN!!! RAWWWRRRRR :3

  Author's response

  Awww, thanks! I wanted to try something a little different ; I'm glad people seem to like it :) I'm actually doing a school project on music journalism right now, so playlists are good practice. Let me know if you have any recommendations! And thanks again, xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-03-14

  Gah. Tantalizingly short...I'm craving more! But it's just awesome. Seriously- like, flawless.
  Can't wait for more, Ms. Talented!
  
  CosmicZombie xo

  Author's response

  Aww shucks! I'm gonna write more tonight, I promise :) Thank you ever so much! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) BoomBoomJude 2012-03-17

  I remember coming back to FicWad every day after school to look for an update, and getting sad that there wasn't one yet.
  
  BUT THE WAIT MADE IT EVEN BETTER.
  
  THIS.
  
  Is my favourite story on FicWad at the moment.
  
  I can't wait to read more! :D
  
  Jude xox

  Author's response

  Duuude...that's so sweet, thank you ever so much! I'm trying to write, but it's pretty dense and it's slow-going. I'll update soon, I promise :) hope you keep liking it! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) PartyPooperX 2012-03-31

  Ooh nice, me likey. You're an extremely talented writer, and this really is so original. One of my favourite stories to read right now - I literally flipped when I saw you updated!
  
  Take your time with this, don't feel pressured to update and then rush it. It's too good to be spoiled!

  Author's response

  Ohh, thank you ever so much! This totally made my day, I'm really flattered. It's actually been taking me forever to write, so it's good you don't mind :) New things should be up soon, I'm puttering away. Thanks again, I hope you keep enjoying it! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) amos222 2012-03-31

  This was amazing! I really like this story, and I am drooling over how awesome it is. I'd kinda like to read the books that you said this is based off of, just to see how they match up. The plot of this is really thick and I am completely relishing the hope for another update soon. Thank you for writing this.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! The plot is pretty much mine, and the books deal more with criminal profiling and are the source of my background knowledge :) You could also try watching the X-Files, I've definitely drawn a lot of my stuff from that. I haven't had a ton of time to write lately and I feel sooooo bad, but I'm working on an update that should be out sometime this week. Thanks again, it means a lot! xo

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