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• The Halo Files

  (#) SimplexMinded 2012-04-06

  this is so amazing. So well written and such an intresting concept. I've never seen anything like it and i just absolutely love it! please update soon!!!!

  Author's response

  Oh god, thank you so much! Sorry I haven't been posting recently, I'm doing all these crazy visits to decide where I want to go to college...this story's been on my mind though, and I'll write as soon as I have time :) Thanks again! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) monstrice901 2012-04-10

  I just read the first three chapters and WOW! Is all I have to say. You are definitely on to something here, and I cannot wait to see how this turns out. This is worthy of being published - not even joking; you deserve money for this! It is incredible.
  
  You've portrayed the characters perfectly, and although Waycest (or incest in general) is usually enough to make me stop reading something, somehow it makes this story even better.
  
  I haven't read the stuff you've based this off, but I'd love to just to see how close the two are. Even if you've literally picked the storyling up, and are just re-working it, it's all done well enough so you can get away with it. Grammar/spelling mistakes are - as far as I can see - are non-existent, and you've done an amazing job of setting the scene and background and just everything. I have really been blown away by this.
  
  I CANNOT wait for more, so update ASAP!!
  
  Sx

  Author's response

  Thank you!!! We'll see if I can rework it into a non-MCR story...merp. Someday, I hope. I, too, find Waycest a little creepy (I have a younger sister who kind of reminds me of Mikey), but I thought it kind of made Gerard redeemable. You'll see later (if I ever get around to writing xD) that everything he's done has been to protect his brother, not just because he's an evil crazy murderer. The plot is actually the product of my deranged mind, and the sources I've mentioned (Silence of the Lambs too, I guess) are where I've gotten details or ideas from. I don't love plagiarism as a rule, so I thought I'd give credit to some of the things that inspired me :) I've been on a whole string of crazy college visits for the past week, and haven't had time to focus on anything else, but hopefully I'll put out a nice fat update in the next week or so. Thank you so so much for your lovely, thoughtful review - sorry my answer's so long! xo

• The Halo Files

  (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-26

  Wow.
  How did I just find this? I'm so very glad that I found this.
  It's perfect.
  I mean, murder and alien abductions AND possible Frerard, Waycest. Sheesh. This has everything, doesn't it?
  I love the amount of detail placed in this story, it makes everything so real in my head as I'm reading.
  I can't wait to see what happens next. With the way you're writing this... I can't even imagine.
  

  Author's response

  Kind of a mash-up, I know. My mind is a wild place. Thank you sooooo much!

• The Halo Files

  (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-26

  Sad moment.
  I saw this on the recent stories list and got all excited but...
  I'm still patiently waiting.
  :)
  I know a work of art like this takes time.

  Author's response

  I'm updating as fast as I'm writing it, so there might be one more chunk coming tonight that will end the chapter. You can count on more in the next few days, I just don't have the willpower to write pages and pages and upload it all at once. I'm a bad person :)

• The Halo Files

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-27

  Ahh, I hadn't realised you'd added more to this chapter! Fucking hell dude, this is BRILLIANT. I'm completely addicted, and you are insanely talented. Can't wait for more! :D
  
  Hope you're okay :)
  
  CosmicZombie xo
  
  P.S I hope my last email sent okay- my account completely crashed last week and everything kinda got screwed :L

  Author's response

  Thank you!!! I'm fine and I feel like such a shit for not emailing you back, my house is just getting renovated and everything is a little crazy. As in, we have no power and no water and I'm sitting in my room with all my cats for the next week or so. I'll send you a looong email real soon, I promise. Thanks again! xoxo

• The Halo Files

  (#) SimplexMinded 2012-04-30

  god....this is just so amazing! Please update soon! It could like, legit be a book!

  Author's response

  Awww, that's super flattering! I have absolutely no confidence in my own work, but we'll see if this goes anywhere. Thanks so much! xo

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