That was brilliant. I loved the beat and the re-occuring line, the message, everything. Very relatable as well. Damn, another one of yours onto my favourites? At this rate they'll be no space for anyone else!
That was amazing, truly one of the best things I've ever read...Gahhh makes me never want to write again cuz my stuff will never compare '~'
That was fucking brilliant. Deep and chilling and very real. This is definitely going into my favourites.
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