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How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
10 reviews"Would a kiss make it better?" Frank simply nodded and Gerard gave him one of the most pure, simple innocent kisses any two people had ever shared. xFRERARD ONESHOTx
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How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) GasolineBaby007 2012-03-19
That was so beautiful. I loved it! -How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) DangerousAmber 2012-03-19
it was great, beautiful
loved it c:How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) Sleeping7Beast 2012-03-19
Awwe, that was cute :3 good work!
-SBHow Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) KelseyChem 2012-03-19
That was adorable, I loved the ending X3How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) PoisonsRevenge 2012-03-19
That is the best story that I have read.... I loved it update soon please :)Author's response
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it...but it's a one-shot;)How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-03-19
Hm... Well. Fuck. That was lovely. I loved it.
NOW FOR THAT PART I ALWAYS DO THAT TAKES FOR FUCKING EVER AND IS KINDA MEAN BUT NOT REALLY FECK YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!
Please, please please please PLEASE go through it and change the & to the proper word 'and'! Ugh! That is just one thing I really don't like, just makes me want to fucking scream. (Um... I hail from planet strange.) the story was lovely, but WHY DID YOU HAVE TO WRITTEN THE SEMI SOPHISTICATED EFFECT WITH THE SYMBOL OF SATAN?!? You kill me, man. You really do.
Second- I know how fucking easy this is to do, I think I accidentally do it quite often myself, but there are places you have a period (.) instead of a space ( ). (No, I don't think you're stupid I just wanted to put I the right symbol... Or lack of.)
Hm... It bugs me when people do 'ok' instead of 'okay', but I'm pretty sure most people don't mind and it's only considered incorrect in some forms of the English language.
That's really all I got-- it was a good story, and I can't wait for an update of My Psychotic Romance. I really like your work (thus the fucking long reviews), so please update! Hm... One day, I'm going to write you a review longer than your chapter. (count on it)
Well... Yup.
UPDATE! AND O WILL STAKE YOU BECAUSE I AM A BITCH!!! LOL note the username ;)
Have a nice day! (yeah, jut had to end it on that fucking positive note xD)How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) xXLaylaxX 2012-03-21
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr [dies of the motherfucking cuteness in this]
I love you, I honestly do. Not in the 'lets go fuck in the bushes' type of love. That would be weird because you're gay....xD
The ONLY problem that I had with this is sometimes you just forget to use 'h'. On my old computer, the 'n' key fell off and it was really fucking hard to press it and sometimes I would spell without the 'n'. I dunno if that's what's happening but 'throughout' and 'through' are both spelled without 'h's.
UPDATE MY PSYCHOTIC ROMANCE, BITCH! THAT STORY IS AWESOME.
[nods] That is all.How Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) CooCooPrincess 2012-08-28
I liked this a lot...I'd consider it a privilege if you could review mine for me...haha this was so good omgHow Can I Ever Survive Without You?
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-09-02
/lxshdf izuedfkjhgui SOOOOOOO DAMNED CUTE!!!!!!!
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