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Doesnt have one
(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-04-15
Dude... Haven't you ever heard of quotation marks?? >.Author's response
dude havn't you read my new chpater -.- there are quotaion marks in that...Doesnt have one
(#) RockMusic 2012-04-15
Friendly advice: if people are talking throughout the chapter or "scene," if you will. Use quotation marks or narrate it through.
Examples
"I don't think you should buy that," -random name here- informed me with rather too much excitement.
Narrating it through would be something like.
She droned on and on about what I could and couldn't buy.
Not hating, just constructive critisism and trying to help you out.
Sorry if it came across as mean.Author's response
Nah it's okay, but I have been using quotaion arks in my new chapter :P Im not very good with grammar and shit though...
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